The Narrative Audit.
Why your message sounds right, but still doesn’t convert
An audit to pinpoint where your pitch, website, and content lose trust, and what to fix first.
For founders and businesses selling high-ticket services who keep hearing “this is interesting,” but struggle to move prospects to a clear yes.
In two sessions, we pinpoint where your message loses power,
explain why people hesitate, and decide what to stop, keep, and fix first.
What changes after the audit? You leave with:
A clear explanation of what’s hurting conversion.
A short list of priority fixes
Direction your team can actually follow
You’ll know what to fix, and what to ignore.
The next step is a short screening call.
This is not a strategy or coaching call, just a quick check to see if the audit makes sense.
Close deals 23% faster
Raise capital at 35% higher rates
Command premium pricing
Earn 30-50% higher margins
Build the Narrative That Drives Strategy
Not Just a Marketing Decoration.
For founders, creators, and independents ready to turn attention into connection, conversion, and retention.
Founders with compelling narratives:
Close deals 23% faster
Raise capital at 35% higher rates
Command premium pricing.
Storytelling-led brands earn 30-50% higher margins.
After Purchase Chose the option best fits your routine
1- Mondays: Oct 20, 27, Nov 3 & 10 – 6 PM (Paris time)
2- Tuesdays: Oct 21, 28, Nov 4 & 11 – 8:30 PM (Paris time)
This if for you if:
After this Audit, Founders don’t just find clarity, they start leading differently. Their pitch sharpens, their sales feel effortless, and their team finally rallies behind one clear story.
Most brands don't need more content.
They need more coherence.
Your message looks polished, but something feels off. The words are right, yet the feeling is gone. The client doesn't buy, they just nod their head and say "send me more information."
Here’s what that costs you:
- Confused positioning: your audience no longer knows what you stand for.
- Muted differentiation: you sound like everyone in your category.
- Lost trust: people can’t follow what doesn’t feel consistent.
The audit identifies these fractures before they turn fatal, so your brand can sound as strong as it truly is.
What You’ll Get
to get work done
A visual breakdown of your branding narrative today
3 new narrative pillars that drive conversions
Learn how your audience speaks and what triggers them
A set of rules for what to say and not to maximize success
The playbook to rebuild your image and build trust fast
Inside the
Narrative
A.
By the End,
You’ll Be Able
To...
Craft a story that commands attention
Speak about your business with clarity and confidence
Build a brand that feels emotionally intelligent
Cut through noise and sell to your ideal clients
Integrated messaging across your business
Why It’s Worth It
Real People. Real Stories. Real Change.
I'm Théo Mahy-Ma-Somga
Cannes-awarded filmmaker turned narrative strategist.
I’ve worked with founders, creators, and mission-led companies around the world to help them uncover the emotional truth behind their work and turn it into a story people actually feel.
My job isn’t to help you polish your message. It’s to help you find the truth beneath it. The meaning that connects your voice to the people who need to hear it. The emotional bridge between what you do and why it matters.
This is where your story becomes the foundation for everything you say, build, and sell.
Still Got Questions?
It is normal to fear the reality that your story isn't working and it struggles to land. Théo garauntees every client that they will walk away not only feeling confident in the new framework but that it is rooted in best practices that he knows work.
Both. Whether you're clarifying your story for the first time or fine-tuning your brand voice, this cohort helps you go deeper.
Perfect. This isn’t about replacing what you’ve done, it’s about making it more emotionally powerful and aligned.