Stop Losing Deals To Bad Storytelling
Your product works. Your pitch doesn't. Here's why:
While you're perfecting features, competitors with weaker products are stealing your customers, investors, and talent. Simply because they tell better stories.
- Close deals 23% faster
- Raise capital at 35% higher rates
- Command premium pricing. Storytelling-led brands earn 30-50% higher margins.
The 60-Minute Story Fix Call
The Diagnosis
→ I'll dissect exactly why your message falls flat (spoiler: It's not your product)
The One-Fix Solution
→ Walk away with ONE powerful narrative shift that starts working immediately
Your Narrative Plan
→ A personalized strategy showing what's broken, how to fix it, and your next moves
The Numbers Don't Lie
Companies with a clear and strong narrative:
than feature-focused competitors
through emotional connection
at rates 35% higher
64% longer with value-driven stories
see 20% higher team engagement, aligned around a clear mission
Book Your Story Fix Call
Who Needs a Story Fix?
Tech Founders
"We're an AI-powered SaaS platform that optimizes..." Stop. Investors don't fund features. They fund futures they believe in.
E-commerce Builders
Racing to the bottom on price? Without story armor, you're just another commodity waiting to be undercut.
Growth-Stage Leaders
Scaling teams, raising rounds, expanding markets, but your message is still stuck in startup mode.
Fundraising Founders
Pitch deck getting polite nods but no checks? Your story is the problem, not your numbers.
But Why Is This Free?
Honest answer:
This is a $1,000+ strategy session I'm giving away because most founders have no idea how much money their weak/lack of story is costing them.
I want to prove to you just how powerful the right narrative can be. Once you experience what happens when your story actually connects, when investors lean in instead of zoning out, when customers choose you over cheaper alternatives, you'll understand why story isn't marketing decoration. It's your most underrated revenue driver.
Here's the thing:
I'm genuinely obsessed with helping founders share their story. Even if we never work together beyond this call, I get fired up knowing you'll walk away with something that transforms how your market sees you. Your success story becomes part of mine.
Still Skeptical? Fair Enough.
Perfect. Most founders don't. I'll extract it from what you're already doing, then frame it so people actually care.
It won't. But it WILL give you one breakthrough that changes everything. Plus a roadmap for the rest.
Great! Now let's make sure people believe the story behind it. Features inform. Stories sell.
You don't need to be. I am. You just need to be good at running your business, which you already are.
Proof This Actually Works
I'm Théo Mahy-Ma-Somga
I’ve worked with founders, creators, and mission-led companies around the world to help them uncover the emotional truth behind their work and turn it into a story people actually feel.
My job isn’t to help you polish your message. It’s to help you find the truth beneath it. The meaning that connects your voice to the people who need to hear it. The emotional bridge between what you do and why it matters.
This is where your story becomes the foundation for everything you say, build, and sell.
Last Chance to Stop the Bleeding
Once these are filled, the doors close. Next availability: 6-8 weeks out.